The Trap Poem

afraid, lost, and alone

very far away from home

motivation no longer insight

I must find a way to fight

back from all the hurtful voices

need to make some better choices

please do not be sad again

cannot count how long it’s been

since I felt confident and free

I need to come and rescue me

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One thought on “The Trap Poem

  1. The positive lines in this poem show your inner strength.

    I must find a way to fight: shows you know you must find your way out of this trap and that you have the will to do it.

    Need to make some better choices: shows you know what has to change and you know how to do it.

    I need to come and rescue me: shows you are aware you need saving, you know you are the one who must do it, and you believe that it is possible. The most powerful line of all!

    (What you really need to do, in addition to getting well, is write more poetry!)

    I believe in you! But most importantly, you believe in yourself! Thank you for sharing your confidence today, Bella! 🌻

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